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Post by Oakfang on Jun 9, 2008 22:27:44 GMT
this is a poem which I did a few weeks ago, it has a very powerful and emotional ending.
Why? For my cat, Muffin.
Why is the sky blue? Why are flowers so pretty? Why is god almighty? Why are people racist? Why are people different, not the same? Why are we different races? Why do people love each other? Why does hate exist? Why can't we cure all diseases? Why are people so miserable? Why are we killing the planet? Why do people die? Why do I have no hair? Why am I dieing? Why are my limbs so heavy? Why can't I see you? Why am I so tired? Why?
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Jun 13, 2008 1:34:17 GMT
Ten for this one. No comments otherwise, as I'm not entirely sure if what I'd have to say would be taken well.
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Post by Oakfang on Jun 15, 2008 22:06:53 GMT
thats not a whole lot. um, go ahead, I want your criticism!
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