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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Apr 9, 2007 8:04:40 GMT
*Terragon jumps in fright as Strongpaw appears, but soon realises the advantages of having a hare with them.* Strongpaw - you're a faster runner than most - get back to Terralux and warn 'em. Vermin! *The squirrel doesn't wait for a reply, she nods to Stoakly and makes her way towards the sounds of the fight. Admittedly, the leaderess did tell Stoakly not to do exactly what she's doing, but in Terragon's defense, Adoni has a better chance now.*
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Post by Stoakly Centurio on Apr 10, 2007 16:38:30 GMT
OOC: Better, Strongpaw. ;D But remember to use punctuation after asterisks. Instead of *Stoakly salutes* Hello, Terri! It would be *Stoakly salutes .* Hello, Terri! And so on... BIC: *Stoakly salutes back to the hare, still glaring with the corner of his eye at Terragon. The ferret is worried about his cousin, but he hopes it does not show. He nods in agreement with Terragon's orders and turns to the squirrel.* I say we help Adoni. Agreed? *Before waiting for an answer, he unsheathes the cutlass and dashes back off through the woods.* OOC: Oh, and Strongpaw, try short posts. Just two-three sentences for now. It is easier to proof-read. Use spellcheck, remember puntcuation, and you'll do fine. I can already see the potential of a great RPer in you. ;D
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Apr 10, 2007 16:58:41 GMT
Agreed! *Terragon shouts back. She hurries through the darkness, pausing every moment or so to check on Stoakly and to listen for sounds of fighting. The leaderess' breathing is a little heavy as she reaches the fight. Terragon stands for a moment, caught by the scene, almost like a moth in the bright glow of a fire... Then she snaps back to reality, and realises, for she has forgotten again, or chosen to forget, that she is unarmed.*
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Apr 10, 2007 17:58:50 GMT
*Ria's head turns to stare at the newcomers, although her cutlass blade never moves from Adoni's throat. Ambar, too, looks suprised. * *The other vermin turn quickly and point various weapons at the enemy, one or two pulling back bowstrings. * *Ria speaks first.* *Not another move, see? I'd hate t' have t' kill this young ferret..he's cute, fer a good 'un.
OOC: Well...this is a situation.
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Post by Strongpaw on Apr 10, 2007 21:49:54 GMT
OCC:ill try my best, Stoakly.
BIC:*Meanwhile Strongpaw runs full speed toward Terralux.* I wont jolly well let down Terragon or Stoakly! *He runs and runs but suddenly he spots a stoat in front of him, Strongpaw looks for another way, but to late he has been spotted! The stoat is coming after him!* Don't waste your energy old lad, ill still jolly well will escape you, but wait why escape when i can..... *Strongpaw takes his bow and fires an arrow* .... jolly well kill you. *Strongpaw continues running toward Terralux as if the encounter with the stoat had never happened.*
OCC:i modyfied this post, Geordie. Thanks for telling me
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Post by Geordie Brushtail on Apr 11, 2007 6:29:58 GMT
OCC:ill try my best, Stoakly. BIC:*Strongpaw takes his bow and kills the vermin without a sound* Strongpaw, that is what is considered an autohit. You can attack a vermin, even specify a miss, but you cannot specifically say "I wound" or "I kill." You can specify where you aim and even continue as if the encounter did end in your victory. Please amend your post accordingly. And please use proper sentence structure and punctuation, it makes it much less confusing to read. Otherwise, you seem to be coming along nicely.
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Apr 11, 2007 10:21:30 GMT
OOC: I think it was his own vermin......kind of an NPC.
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Post by Strongpaw on Apr 11, 2007 21:19:30 GMT
OCC: i really am not sure what an NPC is, so i changed my post. ;D
BIC: *Strongpaw arrives at Terralux looking for help.* Hey, jolly ole chaps! I need someone to jolly well help me fight off vermin. wot wot. * He raises his voice.* Our leaders are in danger, someone please jolly well help! wot wot. *He stands beneath a tree waiting for someone to help.*
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Post by Stoakly Centurio on Apr 11, 2007 22:07:49 GMT
OOC: Strongpaw, an NPC is a Non Playable Character. A character who no one RPs for, but if you want, you can use them. I'm not quite sure what the standard regarding NPCs are here, but a few sites do not allow auto-hits even on them.
Oh, and PERIODS before asterisks! *Stoakly dances.* Hooray! *He continuues dancing.* Like that, okay?
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Post by Geordie Brushtail on Apr 12, 2007 5:07:17 GMT
OOC: The rules here are no autohits, even on NPCs that you create; mainly, it's a protection against godmoding.
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Apr 12, 2007 14:57:22 GMT
OOC: Now what? Were this another roleplay, I'd have a clergy member threaten to excommunicate everyone if they didn't back off - but that isn't gonna fly here. Baraka, now might be a good time to come in...with Strongpaw.
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Post by Baraka on Apr 23, 2007 14:07:25 GMT
*Baraka runs over to Terragon, a satchel flapping around behind him.* I came as soon as I found out! What's the situation? *His eye catches on Adoni and Ria.* Oh. That can't be good.
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Post by Strongpaw on Apr 24, 2007 21:21:58 GMT
*Strongpaw had seen Baraka leaving and had gone after him, So he arrives just after the squirrel.* What has jolly well happened here? *He looks and takes in the situation at one glance. hoping noone would see him he strings his bow for an emergency.*
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Post by Stoakly Centurio on Apr 24, 2007 21:45:31 GMT
OOC: Strongpaw, that was your best post yet! Good job! But you need to stay consistent in tenses. You started off in past tense and ended in presence. FYI, we use present tense here. Also, don't say: without anyone seeing. Because our characters get to decide whether we see you or not. All in all, though, nice job!!!
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Apr 24, 2007 21:51:02 GMT
*Ria nods to the vermin. They aim arrows in Baraka and Strongpaw's direction. The ferret aiming at Strongpaw pulls his bowstring back as the hare moves around in the background, but doesn't risk a shot.*
OOC: It's difficult to string a longbow without anyone noticing.
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