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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Nov 17, 2005 20:46:25 GMT
Also, you're switching from past to present tense. You ought to post in present tense only.
*thinking about what she was doing triska stopped abruptly and starts fighting the vermin once again*
*Thinking about what she was doing, Triska stops abruptly and starts fighting the vermin once again.*
'Kay?
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 18, 2005 8:15:45 GMT
OOC: Well, me and Robin keep telling her this, but she only ignores it, and then says she was never told. And Triska, please take the RP test!!![/b]
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Nov 18, 2005 13:33:48 GMT
OOC: *sighs* Another one?....
Or some RP LESSONS. From a ROLEPLAYER.
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 18, 2005 17:18:50 GMT
OOC: Anyway...
BIC: * Terragon leaps into the tangle of rope that is the anchor line, digging her claws in, she scales it, finally dropping onto the boat deck... it is deserted!* *A brief check of the lower deck reveals a miserable bottom deck of chained mice.* *Frowning, without time to help the mice, Terragon returns to the top deck.* *The scene below her makes her wish she was back with Robin and the others, teaching the rats a lesson. She sighs, then crouchs, bitting carefully through the anchors rope. A couple of strands slowly break, another, a small clump, more... and... it breaks, crumpling into the shallows.* *The squirrel tightens the sails, and allows the wind to drift away from the shore. The vermin are stranded, the mice will soon be freed, and Terragon is now skipper of... The Dripping Fang? A change of name is definately needed!*
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Post by triska on Nov 20, 2005 12:20:01 GMT
Wahey go Terragon!!
OOC:i have signed up for the RP test thingy
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 20, 2005 13:03:05 GMT
OOC: Good!
BIC: *Within minutes Terragon has made a temporary anchor, and dropped it.* Black squirrels! *She yells.* Sandagar's heir returns again! *She yells. Almost immediately, a hoarde of black squirrels appear around her, and begin to swarm on to the DIY-anchor, onto the boat.* *They help Terragon up, and sail the boat themselves to the sounds of the battle.*
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Post by triska on Nov 20, 2005 13:05:25 GMT
*Triska watches fromt he beach with confusion*
OOC:Are the black squirrels friend or foe
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 20, 2005 13:09:29 GMT
OOC: Who knows? They obey Sandagar's heir though!
BIC: *The squirrels and Terragon leap into the shallows, the anchor splashing to the sandy, watery floor.* SANDAAGAAAARAAHHH!!!!! *Terragon roars.* AAASSSSHHH WAAAARRRRIOOOOOOORSSS! *The squirrels bellow back.*
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Post by triska on Nov 20, 2005 13:12:12 GMT
* Triska runs as fast as her paws would allow to her friends side*
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 20, 2005 13:50:57 GMT
*Ashnel hisses at Triska.* Leave her, she's fighting... looks like a badger, when the blood goes to their 'eads!
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Nov 20, 2005 15:54:10 GMT
*Tinsy drops what she's carrying, then draws her sword and charges into the fight, cursing. She heads for Terri, then is blocked off by a herd of vermin. She growls, then points out at the ocean. Another ship is seen anchored behind a spar of land. *EVERYONE GET GOING!! THEY'VE GOT A FLEET!
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 20, 2005 16:01:13 GMT
*Terragon rushes to Tinsy, looking more sensible for a second.* I'll try and get the others onto the ship. Ashnel! Tell half of the South-Squirrels to get everybeast onto the ship! *Ashnel nods.* Aye, Terragon of Scruffy Tail!
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Nov 20, 2005 19:07:31 GMT
*Tinsy stares at the ship they have, mutters something, and runs towards it. She clambers onboard, drops her sword on the deck, and heads towards the tiller, cursing eloquently and not prettily.*
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Post by Terragon Scrufftail on Nov 20, 2005 20:24:05 GMT
*Terragon begins to follow Tinsy, but trips, and a rat approaches. Ashnel's nephew, who is also named Ashnel, rushes forwards, grabbing Terragon and hauling himself and her onto the boat.* *Terragon now leaps to her feet.* Cast off, now! Haul up the anchor! Tinsy - the tiller! *She turns to Ashnel.* Thanks. *Ashnel grins, he is Terragon third cousin, many times removed, on somebeast's side of the family!*
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Post by Tinsy Stormsight on Nov 21, 2005 18:09:53 GMT
*Tinsy reaches the tiller and unties it, then looks back at the rest of the group. *Check the rudder, make sure it's intact!
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